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I Believe in Your Story
What Kids Think is Funny
picture books August 22nd, 2008
If you want to write a picture book with humor, you must understand the development of humor in kids. Thanks, Tammi, for asking for something on this topic. If you have requests for a certain topic about picture books, send me an email, or put something in the comments.
Writing Funny Picture Books
To understand what kids think is funny, you must read Paul E.McGhee, Ph.D, the guru of kids’ humor.
He has a great article on the Bank Street College website about the stages of humor. He goes into more details than I do here and you should read it.
- 0-6 months: Laughter without Humor
Few, if any picture books for this group include humor. - 6-15 months: Laughter at Attachment Figure
You’d need personalized picture books to evoke humor here, because you need the specific person. This is when the adult reading the book can add humor, though, by playing with the story and reading it with expression and by changing the text, tone of voice, etc. - 2-4 years: Misnaming Objects or Actions

Kids deliberately misname an object or action to see what the adult says. For a great example of this, look at Blue Hat, Green Hat by Sandra Boynton. In this delightful book, the turkey consistently is wrong in how he puts on the item of clothing. - 3-5 years: Playing with Word Sounds.
Ever wonder why so many editors emphasize word play for kids? Here’s why. Kids think it’s funny.
The Recess Queen by Alexis O’Neill is funny, partly because of the great language. “Kits and Kajammer ‘em.” - 5-7 years: Pre-riddle Stage
Kids understand the form of a riddle, but don’t understand vocabulary enough to understand what is funny and what isn’t. This is the age of almost incoherent knock-knock jokes:Knock-knock. Who’s there? Nobody’s home!
- 6-8 years: Riddles
For this stage, all the joke books apply. Kids love to read, hear, and tell jokes of all kinds. They read Amelia Bedelia by Peggy Parish. True humor has started to emerge.
RELATED: Read what Jill Esbaum says about humor in picture books.
Read the Series
This is part of a series, 30 Days to a Stronger Picture Book.
See Also: 30 Days to a Stronger Novel
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THis series was my kids’ favorite series. They loved this author and these books. Boynton is wonderful.