Helping Writers Revise

Picturebooks

odds March 30th, 2007

by Darcy Pattison

WHAT NOT TO DO

Cheryl Klein, editor at Arthur A. Levine Books, has posted a bad picturebook mss to illustrate what-not-to-do. Great fun. And What Not to Tell an Editor. Learn that etiquette!

GIVE

BAFAB Buy a Friend a Book Week starts tomorrow! If you’re looking for suggestions, I’ve written a couple picturebooks myself! (As the Car Talk boys say: This is the Shameless Commerce Division posting.)

JUST FUN

Get ready for April’s Fool Day!
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Climbing Walls and Manga

odds March 29th, 2007

by Darcy Pattison
My daughter who loves the tall bike also loves climbing walls. This Japanese wall is for her!
Interested in writing Manga in English? Anne Harris lists publishers of original-English Mangas.
Anyone interested in a Million Dollar laptop?
A reminder to make sure your novels are targeted to a certain genre. This particular rejection convinces me that a revision is needed to firmly plant my novel’s roots aka plot, pacing and tone into a specific category.
Do your rejection letters have the dreaded comment: I just don’t connect to the story? Here’s how one author tackled that comment in her revisions. how to add a hit counter to a website

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query and synopsis

marketing March 28th, 2007

by Darcy Pattison
Liz, at the Because It Takes a Village to Raise a Writer blog has been talking about queries and synopses for the last week (March 20-28). Lots of good info and links: Harold Underdown, Cheryl Klein (editor at Arthur A. Levine Books) and more.

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Novel revision

odds March 28th, 2007

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From the NaNoWriMo people: Episode 8 of their Wrimo Radio report “delves into the ups and downs of novel revision and shares some NaNo success stories from the world of e-books.”
One objection I’ve heard to using the Friday Ideas is that it’s hard to come up with stories starting with just a single word. There are lots of alternatives! One writer uses the Writer’s Book of Days to help inspire stories and revisions.

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Women writers & teaching morals

odds March 22nd, 2007

by Darcy Pattison
Do women suffer from the Rural Schoolteacher Syndrome and thus lack imagination in their fiction? Three Newbery honor books go against this opinion.
Writing a historical fiction set it the Appalachian Mountains? You need this website about mountain dialect.
Using animal characters–like Smokey the Bear–to teach our kids about right and wrong.

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Friday Ideas

picture books March 22nd, 2007

This has been a difficult year in many ways with lots of family situations demanding attention. Add to that my DH’s hip replacement surgery last week, and my daughter’s upcoming wedding in June. I realized last fall that it would be hard for me to commit emotionally to a big project like a novel. So, what would I do about my writing?

Write More Picturebooks

I realized that the smartest thing I could do was try writing picturebooks. Yet, many of my efforts last year resulted in editorial letters that said, “Nice mss. But it won’t compete in today’s crowded market.”

What to do?

Enter IllustrationFriday.com . Illustrators visit this website each Friday to get a key word and then they produce a piece of art and link it to the IF site. It’s a way for them to showcase their art, and work to expand their portfolios–and hopefully have some fun.

If illustrators can do it, why not writers? I wanted to play! I invited a group of nine other writers to join me and we created a Friday Ideas mailing list. Each week, we take the key word and try to generate at least one unique, different, never before seen in the marketplace, viable idea. Actually, the others are creating LOTS more ideas than one! No critiques within the group, just privately. The list is just about encouraging unique ideas.

Weekly Pattern

So, my weeks have taken on a pattern. On Friday, I get the new word, photocopy the word’s definition from my unabridged dictionary and tape it into my notebook. I use Rhymer.com and find rhyming words and tape that into my notebook. Sometimes, I use Visual Thesaurus and tape that into my notebook, too. Then I read over all that and wail: What did I get myself into? This is a stupid word and there’s no way it will turn into a picturebook.

Saturday through Tuesday are days of working in my notebook, trying anything and everything I can to get some viable ideas. I don’t care where I go in my meanderings with this word, as long as it turns up something unique.

I try to find an idea that fits into this plot pattern: This is a story about ___________(name/description) who more than anything else wants _____________(story goal) but can’t because_____________________________(obstacles) until __________________________________(resolution).

If the word is going to work for me, by about Tuesday or so, I start drafting something. Sometimes, it’s prose; sometimes, poetry. Again, I don’t care, as long as it’s going to new places.

By Thursday, I have a good draft done–if I’m lucky that week. But most of all, I’m excited about getting a new word on Friday. Surely, I tell myself, the new word will be better than the current word and a story idea will just pop out at me.

Friday, I get the new word and plunge into despair again.

Is this working?

Is this new process for generating picturebook ideas working? Do I write a picturebook each week? Isn’t it hard to start with just a single word? Yes, no, sometimes. So far this year, I have four new picturebook mss that I like. A few other ideas are half-developed and are waiting for something to take the ideas to a new level. Others in the group are generating ideas and producing solid drafts, too. Several new submissions already.

Best of all, I don’t have to commit emotionally to a long project to be successful this year. This past week, as my DH went through surgery, I did almost nothing on a new word. (Well, the word was “Total” and I dare you to come up with something good for that one! So, it’s OK. I get a new word in two days and I’m SURE it’ll be a good one.) It didn’t matter that I did almost nothing, because I already have four new mss this year!

We all go through seasons of life and our careers must adjust. That’s what I’m trying to do this year. Adapt. Be flexible. Be original, different, unique, competitive-in-an-already-crowded-market in the midst of a-hectic-year-in-the-life-of-this-family.

Read the 5 month update.

Read the One Year Update

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Revision of a different sort

revision March 21st, 2007

by Darcy Pattison
Two weeks ago, I heard a new use for the word revision, one that made me shudder. I accompanied my DH to an education class about his upcoming hip replacement surgery. The nurse sat on a stool, casually kicking her espadrilles while caressing a ceramic socket-and-ball hip prosthesis. On an x-ray viewer behind her was an x-ray of a hip with that prosthesis in place.
“These will probably last 15-20 years,” she said, “before a REVISION of the hip is required.”
DH had that hip replacement done last Friday and is doing fine. Because he’s in such good shape, he’s already walking with just a cane–no old-timer’s walker for him! And while I preach revision all the time, this is one case in which, I hope we never get around to a revision!

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Jane Yolen on Revision

authors, revision March 14th, 2007

by Darcy Pattison
Since about February 7, Jane Yolen has been talking about Revision on her journal. Much of it comes from her speech at the New York SCBWI conference last month; but she also answers questions from readers. Scroll down to Feb. 7 and then read up the journal. Enjoy!

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Oliver K. Woodman

darcy's books March 12th, 2007

by Darcy Pattison
I’m catching up on postings I should have done earlier. When I was in Syracuse, NY two weeks ago, Joe Newton presented me with this wooden Oliver! Newton is one member of a woodworking club that makes Olivers and donates them to schools. When kids travel, librarians let kids check out Oliver, his backpack and his travel journal. He comes back with pictures and tales to tell.
Thanks, Joe! And thanks for your contribution to your community!

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2007 Wisconsin Picturebook Retreat

picture books, revision March 12th, 2007

by Darcy Pattison
I was in Madison, Wisconsin this weekend for a Picturebook Retreat. You can see pictures here.
We spent the weekend talking about and revising picturebooks:

  • Imperative of the Unique: “Wonderful insistence on FRESH and UNIQUE.” Kathleen Petrella.
  • Focus and structure: “Very useful. I’ll be working through all my stories using these techniques.” Susan Manzke
  • Forms–What’s the best way to tell a story?: “This section gave me permission to completely change my story by telling it different ways I may never have thought of.” Cynthia Schumerth
  • Rhythm and Rhyme: “Good to think beyond poetry v. prose and to get into the rhythm and rhym in each story.” Kate Heling
  • Verbal music: “This was the most important thing for me. You helped me to understand the WHY we do this.” Cynthia Schumerth.
  • Verbal music: “This session made the most radical difference in the way I revised my language.”
  • Dummying the Story: “I’d never done this. The exercise forced me to look at my stories in a different way.” Susan Manzke
  • Dummying the Story: “Excellent. The best ever hands on activity. Helps me believe in the story.” Kathy Hoyos.
  • Friday Ideas (Brainstorming new ideas): “Great idea. Great activity. Not always fun to be pushed, but always worthwhile. Also, nice to have something we can continue at home.” Kim Galkenstein
  • Friday Ideas (Brainstorming new ideas): “I hated this when you first asked us to do it but I think it may emerge as the most powerful thing I’ll take away from this weeknd.” Kate Heling
  • Overall: “This conference was absolutely what I needed. You have such great energy and best of all is your honesty. That’s what helped me create a much better ms.” Mary von Tish.
  • Overall: “This workshop was everything I hoped it would be! It confirmed things I knew but gave me so many tools for growing beyond my current level.” Kate Heling.

Thanks to everyone in Wisconsin for their hospitality!

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